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TheCandyman    104
[img]https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/548808_3552501222090_774249192_n.jpg[/img]Camera didn't do the picture justice though. :/
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Garland    505
[quote name='TheCandyman' timestamp='1339544632' post='3206898']
Camera didn't do the picture justice though. :/
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Scan it?

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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='Element89' timestamp='1339615329' post='3207701']
Interested in being commissioned?
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I can try, I still have a hard time doing things for people. Idk why, just bad at it.
Which is contradictory since I want to be a tattoo artist. :c
But yeah shoot me an Idea, and I'll see if I can draw up a sketch or something.

[quote name='`Phenom' timestamp='1339618410' post='3207770']
[quote name='TheCandyman' timestamp='1339544632' post='3206898']
Camera didn't do the picture justice though. :/
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Scan it?
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Idk where I'd find a scanner big enough. :c
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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='Joker' timestamp='1339644593' post='3208206']
You'll be an exceptional tattoo artist, bro. :wub:
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:rolleyes: Thanks bruh.

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yeah maybe it is a camera issue

the picture looks kinda flat. it's like it's asking me to see it as "depth" and "3D"

you def have skill. ever considered graphic design or drawing game art?

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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='Mr. T' timestamp='1339663580' post='3208438']
yeah maybe it is a camera issue

the picture looks kinda flat. it's like it's asking me to see it as "depth" and "3D"

you def have skill. ever considered graphic design or drawing game art?
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I think it is. Um.
In person the darks are darker, so it gives it a tad more depth I guess, The top left is empty I aware, It does hurt the composition.

Thank you. I considered graphic design, I just graduated high school this month.
I was gonna goto a community college to get my basics out of the way then transfer into KCAI, or SCAD because they liked my portfolio.
But they still wanted to see more life drawings.

Your criticism helps though, Thank you.

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the eye on the left seems unnecessary and doesn't fit with the style of the rest of the piece

the anatomy of the hand is wrong

looks cool otherwise
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i think the hand is great for an abstract piece such as this
i agree that the eye on the left is unnecessary, it kinda ruins the balance. also the eye on the bottom would probably have more effect had it been more "hidden" or further engraved.

overall this is impressive. kudos

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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='Swaggalo's Cock' timestamp='1339697839' post='3208715']
The goblet looks kinda off and I dont really know what Im looking at so I probably cant appreciate it as much as I would otherwise
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There's no goblet. It's a skull w/o it's cap.
It was an art project, where you had to take a human profile and turn it into something "more"
I just ran out of time, and couldn't do as much as I wanted to too it. Thank you though. :)
[quote name='rkat' timestamp='1339676432' post='3208511']
i think the hand is great for an abstract piece such as this
i agree that the eye on the left is unnecessary, it kinda ruins the balance. also the eye on the bottom would probably have more effect had it been more "hidden" or further engraved.

overall this is impressive. kudos
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It was either an eye or nothing.
:C That eye is actually supposed to be an important part of the piece. I didn't do it right. :C
Thanks though.


[quote name='pkmn prof. grant' timestamp='1339671656' post='3208489']
the eye on the left seems unnecessary and doesn't fit with the style of the rest of the piece

the anatomy of the hand is wrong

looks cool otherwise
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I know, but it was either that or leave it empty.
I didn't have enough time to think of something else which is why all the eyes aren't done as well as they could be.
:C Some are ALOT better than others.

Thank you though.

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i think with more planning you could do some cool stuff

also ron it's not so much that the hand doesn't fit (i think it fits perfectly), it's just not drawn well

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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='pkmn prof. grant' timestamp='1339973656' post='3211084']
i think with more planning you could do some cool stuff

also ron it's not so much that the hand doesn't fit (i think it fits perfectly), [u][b]it's just not drawn well[/b][/u]
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Ouch.
My confidence...

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I think the eye isn't out of place. It goes with the rest of the drawing. For me what I notice is that the top left corner is filled with empty space. It could be that the photograph doesn't show the texture of the space well, but it looks effectively empty and not integrated into the rest of the drawing very well.

The eye looks out of place because it is in the middle of a large empty space, alone.

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TheCandyman    104
[quote name='ThePedanticGentleman' timestamp='1340041275' post='3211808']
I think the eye isn't out of place. It goes with the rest of the drawing. For me what I notice is that the top left corner is filled with empty space. It could be that the photograph doesn't show the texture of the space well, but it looks effectively empty and not integrated into the rest of the drawing very well.

The eye looks out of place because it is in the middle of a large empty space, alone.
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Thank You.

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